a quick comparison of the first page.
On the left is a redone version, with the lines in ink with a nib/dib pen
The right is a redone version on different paper, but with a thicker (and simpler/faster) permanent marker.
The second paper is actually whiter than the left one (which is slightly yellowish..)
I plan on redrawing the comic so far, since I'm still figuring out the stoeytelling etc.
Coloring will be done with colored pencils.
My question; which one do you like better? (I'm talking about the lines, not the coloring)
Any other comment is also appreciated, though.